Friday, February 8, 2008

my little star

Twinkle, twinkle little star
I never wondered what you are
You were my friend,From the day we met
You were my companion,In the dark and lonely night
I shared my joys and sorrows with you,
I shared my hopes and dreams with you,
You were the light
In my lonely world
You were my friend
And my guide.
Twinkle, twinkle little star
I really wonder where you are
The dark clouds have hidden your face
My world had become dark again
But i know these clouds will drift away
And i shall see your face again

4 comments:

shibikiran said...

a good poem

shibikiran said...

your poem ' my little star' is good. you can make a slight corretion in the fourth line: in my(not the )dark and lonely night(s).

shibikiran said...

whose eyes are these
that speak in a strange light
words of profound ease
upon the dark night

on stars

Magicofmaya said...

thanks a lot for the comments....i am so glad that some one really liked my poems.ur last comment is really lovely....