"you will remain engraved in my soul
like an unsung song
like an unwritten poem
never will i complain
never will i sigh
i will bury my emotions within my heart
for my laments shoud'nt perturb you
like a serene lake without any ripples
let your mind rejoice in this new found tranquility
never will i ask you to turn back
though i fell down and hurt myself
your strong arms can no longer support me
cos i've lost the strength to hold on......to you."
11 comments:
i hope this was jst wriiten down cause u like writtin ... well u pulled up a broken souls image with ur words
i like to write..but this poem is straight from my heart....these are my feelings which i try to express with words.
You write well
All your poems are good,
but this one doesn't look original, I have read this somewhere before
Do you know who wrote this one?
thanks....i dont know.i belive i wrote ths...i hav posted it in my old orkut profile...and now i had deletd the profile .mayb u must hav seen it thr.or else if u can find out and tell me whr u hav read it???....if i had borrowed it i wud hav mentioned the auther's name...soemtimes i feel that i hav lost my cretivity..but even then i wont copy some one's poem.....thats sounds really ridiculous......
Really love this poem
It is more like a genuine prayer from ur heart...
Im sure ur prayer will be answered
You will definitely get ur Angel back
u are right vandana..and i really wish ...... maybe i shd write a poem abt perseverance......
Good poem.
But, I guess I know where you went wrong.
You may be a good poet, but u r a bad communicator.
In any relation, when things go wrong, people do not just sit back and write beautiful & sensitive poems (it happens only in movies, not in real life).they talk to each other openly and try to resolve the issues together.
maybe that's what went wrong in your case, if you talked instead of wrote, you wouldn't have had to write this poem.
hope things get better.
wish you all the best.
keep writing more(and talking)
Nice poem, Maya
I was going thru the comments too...
I think Rohan's comment is right.
This poem is published by someone else also.
On seeing his comment, I googled for the first line of ur poem and found another blog with the same poem - smtears.blogspot.com
btw 2 questions to you -
-is ur prayers answered? did u get him back?
-why u r not publishing any new poems now?
hope to see more of ur poems
luv,
Ruchi
thanks ruchitha
....cant say my prayers are answered.but now i firmly beleive that evrything happens for a reason....God knows whats best for us. A wrong prayer is now answered in a right way....thats all....and i am happy the way things are.
and abt the poem being published before.....now i really feel e- publishing is a waste.i never wantd to be famous poet or anything.my poems were better off kept hidden in my notebook.i just went thru the blog u had mentioned above.really admire ur thoughtfulness....i went one step ahead and googled few other poems in the blog and found them in some other blogs.
don't think that e-publishing is waste.
you should write more, and publish them in your blog. there are people out there who look forward to good writings like yours.
But at the same time, I feel what Madhurima said in her above comment is also true. There are situations in real life where you'd rather speak than write.
Wish life had a rewind button so that things went better with you.
Since that's not the case, hope someone better will come in your life.
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